Lyndi's Chronicle - Draft 2

Destiny Saga

Lyndi’s Chronicle


Act 1: Start of Rounds – Action Tutorial (Hidden Quick Action)

Scene Setup

Narrative

Prompt

Action

Struggle

Fail

Hidden Tutorial

Hidden Element

Impact on Lannet

  • Increased Frustration
    • Lyndi is startled (fails the quick action).
    • Lannet shoves the clipboard into Lyndi’s hands (fails the action tutorial).
  • Increased Respect
    • Lyndi retains her composure (quick action success).

Act 2: Walk to the First Room – Walk Tutorial

Narrative

Prompt

Action

Struggle

Fail

Impact on Lannet

  • Increased Frustration
    • Lannet has to drag Lyndi to the first room (fail walk tutorial).

Act 3: Clean the Room – Action Tutorial

Narrative

Prompt

Action

Struggle

Fail

Impact on Lannet

  • Increased Frustration
    • Each bed on Lyndi’s side that Lannet has to finish.
  • Increased Respect
    • Avoiding the struggle state (Lyndi keeps pace with Lannet).

Act 4: Mr. Kendri – Dialog Tutorial

Narrative

Prompt

Action

Struggle

Fail

Additional

Impact on Lannet

  • Increased Frustration
    • Each bed on Lyndi’s side that Lannet has to finish.
    • If the conversation with Mr. Kendri drags on and Lannet interrupts it.
    • If Lyndi wakes the sleeping patient.
  • Decreased Frustration
    • Avoiding the struggle state.
  • Increased Respect
    • Avoiding the struggle state.
    • Speaking with Mr. Kendri beyond the minimum “How are you feeling” without taking so long that Lannet must interrupt.
    • Talking to Mr. Kendri before checking his chart.

Act 5: The Ward – Practice

Narrative

Row Selection

Prompt

Action

Struggle

Fail

Veteran Nurses (Flannie & Wilma)

If Lannet has to help finish Lyndi’s row, the comment is about Lannet:

If Lannet does not finish any of Lyndi’s row, the comment is about Lyndi:

Lane Switching

Impact on Lannet

  • Increased Frustration
    • Each bed Lannet has to finish in Lyndi’s row.
    • Lyndi switching rows before completing her own.
    • Lyndi finishing her row before Lannet and helping out (Lannet feels pressured by the comparison).
  • Decreased Frustration
    • Avoiding the struggle state (whether from Lannet, Flannie, or Wilma).
  • Increased Respect
    • Fulfilling patient requests.
    • Finishing her own row.
    • Lyndi switching rows after completing her own (showing initiative, even if it frustrates Lannet).

Act 6: Going Upstairs – Hidden Subtle Dialog Tutorial

Narrative

Conversation Start

Replies

Frustration Replies

Somber Replies

Reflective Replies

Lannet’s Reactions

Frustration

  1. Glares at Lyndi.
  2. “Shut up.”
  3. “Stop being nosy.”
  4. Stops, right hand balls into a fist and shakes briefly; resumes walking in silence.

Somber

  1. Looks down silently.
  2. “Stay focused.”
  3. “Don’t worry yourself.”
  4. Stops, crosses her arms, stays silent briefly, then resumes walking.

Reflective

  1. Takes a deep breath.
  2. “I…”
  3. Closes her eyes briefly.
  4. Hands at her sides; glances down, then looks up and resumes walking.

Outcome

Conversation Mechanics

Impact on Lannet

  • Increased Frustration
    • Selecting frustration replies.
    • Tapping the Dialog button without holding (stuttering).
    • Repeated greetings outside the subtle prompt.
  • Decreased Frustration
    • Not engaging in the conversation.
    • Selecting somber replies.
    • Ending the conversation with “Never mind.”
    • Selecting all four Frustration replies plus one other reply.
  • Increased Respect
    • The first Reflective reply.
    • Selecting all four Reflective replies.
    • Selecting all four Frustration replies.

Act 7: Private Rooms – Advanced Tutorial

Narrative

Prompt

Action

Struggle

Fail

Rooms and Individuals

Impact on Lannet

  • Increased Frustration
    • If Lyndi fails to knock or announce herself before entering.
  • Decreased Frustration
    • If Lyndi waits for Lannet’s demonstration or follows proper procedure without prompting.

Act 7.a: Mr. Roth

Narrative

Initial Interaction Responses

Patient Interaction

Tasks

  1. Adjust the Pillows – Requires long press to adjust properly.
  2. Fetch a Newspaper – Lyndi brings and places it on his side table.
  3. Bring a Glass of Water – Must pour carefully and walk slowly.
  4. Open the Curtains – Long press to pull, or jump + action to reach the rope.
  5. Tidy Up the Side Table – Long press to clean, then dispose of rubbish.

Ring Menu

Conversation Branches

Dog Barking Reaction


Act 7.b: Ms. Liya

Narrative

Initial Interaction Responses

Patient Interaction

Tasks

  1. Get Her Shawl – Retrieve and place over her shoulders.
  2. Bring Water – Same sequence as Mr. Roth: pour carefully, walk slowly, hand it to her.
  3. Help Into Wheelchair – Place wheelchair, then long press action to assist.
  4. Take Her to the Window – Grab wheelchair and move her to the window.
  5. A Moment of Reflection – Ms. Liya closes her eyes, breathes deeply, and reflects. Lyndi simply stands by and listens.

Dialog Ring Menu

Dog Barking Reaction


Act 7.c: Mr. Gregor

Narrative

Door Etiquette — Initial Interaction Responses

Patient Interaction

Tasks

Two sets: core needs first, then extra requests.

First Set

Second Set

Additional Conversations

Etiquette Consequences

7.c (Mn): Full Interaction — Has Not Passed

7.c (Pr): Passing — Present (Hidden Character Agency Tutorial)

Trigger

Death Beat

Character Agency Sequence

After Regaining Control

Lannet’s Arrival

Doctors Arrive

7.c (Ab): Passing — Absent

Global Cue

Other Patients React

Entering During Barking

Ignoring the Bark

7.c (Dr): Passing — Doctors Present

7.c (Em): Passing — Room Empty

Additional Rule


Act 7.d: Aftermath

Narrative

State Resolution

Impact on Lannet

If Mr. Gregor did not pass during Act 7

Increased Frustration

  • Lyndi interacted with any of Lannet’s assigned doors (Open/Knock/Announce).
  • Lannet had to wait a long time for Lyndi to finish her rooms.

Decreased Frustration

  • Lannet did not have to wait long; pacing remained tight.

Increased Respect

  • Lyndi completed her rooms without delaying Lannet.

If Mr. Gregor passed during Act 7

Increased Respect

  • Lannet arrives while Lyndi is visibly crying (and Lannet’s frustration is low); Lannet consoles her.

No other Respect/Frustration changes stemming from private-room interiors.

Transition


Act 8: Reporting Back – Quick Reaction Tutorial

Narrative

Quick Reaction

Chart Collection

Subtle Dialog Prompt – Mr. Gregor’s Passing


Impact on Lannet

  • Increased Frustration
    • If Lyndi fails to dodge the medical team, forcing Lannet to push her.
    • Each chart Lannet has to pick up.
  • Decreased Frustration
    • If Lyndi dodges the medical team without Lannet’s help.
  • Increased Respect
    • If Lyndi collects more charts than Lannet.
    • If Lyndi engages with the subtle dialog about Mr. Gregor’s passing.

Act 9: The Nurse’s Office – Report

Narrative

Report Flow


Lannet’s Critical Lines


Head Nurse Deliah’s Tempering Line

If Lannet is critical, Deliah adds:
“I understand you are both new nurses, and mistakes will happen. It’s better to act and make mistakes than to hesitate because you’re afraid of doing something wrong.”

Additional Presentation Details

Ring Menu Replies (per criticized act)

Impact on Lannet

Decreased Frustration

  • Each critical line she gets to deliver (venting lowers her tension).

Increased Respect

  • Turning in all charts.
  • Lyndi engages the subtle Dialog windows in this act (acknowledging feedback, not arguing).

Act 10: Break – Free Roam

Narrative: Lyndi and Lannet part ways for break; the hospital opens up for exploration and quiet character beats.
Bell Tower Mechanic:

Impact on Lannet
Increases Frustration: Lyndi pesters Lannet at cafeteria until she leaves/locks the room.
Decreases Frustration: Lyndi gives Lannet space during break.


Hospital Interactions

(Free-roam locations and light interactions; Dialog capitalization and Tap/Hold grammar omitted here for readability.)

Main Lobby

Consulting Rooms

Infirmary (two additional rooms)

Wards

Pediatric Ward

First Floor Nurse Station

Administrative Offices (Clerk, Administrator, Records)

Doctor Break Room

Convalescent Ward

Herb Garden / Apothecary (Roof)

Morgue (Basement)

Laboratory & Custodial Area

Orderly Room (2F)

Outside Areas (Garden, Courtyard, Pavilion, Fountain)

Second Floor Nurse Station

Chapel & Bell Tower (2F)

Lyndi & Lannet’s Room / Nurses’ Quarters

Cafeteria


Side Stories

(Optional narrative threads; no heavy branching.)

Conversations

Opinions on Lannet

Private Patients (revisits)

Reactions to Mr. Gregor’s Passing


Rolla Side Story

Starting Points: Begins at passing (Act 7), may thread through Acts 8–10.
Leash & Calming: Leash Rolla; fresh flower behind her ear calms and makes leading easy. Preserved flower unlocks talk only.
Path A — To Deliah: Head Nurse takes Rolla; dog settles with her.
Path B — To Morgue: Rolla lies by Gregor; subtle Dialog “Goodbye, Mr. Gregor.”
Act 8 Special Case: If Rolla is present and corridor QTE fails, Lyndi drops the leash; Rolla runs to the morgue and waits.
Act 10 Safeguards: Handling Rolla during Break does not affect Lannet’s frustration.
World Persistence: Rolla stays where last led (Deliah, morgue, or Gregor’s room) until moved.

Impact on Lannet
Increased Frustration: Lyndi follows Rolla to morgue during Act 8 and misses Act 9.
No Change (Act 10): Break-time handling doesn’t affect frustration.
Increased Respect: Lyndi uses a fresh flower to calm Rolla; delivers Rolla calmly to Deliah.


Act 11: The Administrator’s Office – Call for Volunteers

Act 11.1: Outside the Administrator’s Office – Hidden Eavesdrop Tutorial

Narrative

Action

Lannet’s Responses

Bell Rings


Act 11.2a: The Call – Volunteers Requested

Narrative

Director’s Address

“Please, gather close. I have to talk to you all.”
“First of all, I want to tell you that I am glad to see you all well. We have not seen each other since you were assigned to this hospital.”
“I have come to send a nurse from our honorable school to the front. Several hospitals have already sent doctors and nurses to help the war effort. They are all hard at work. From this hospital, three doctors and five nurses have gone.”
“Our school will send three nurses, one of whom will be from this class. I don’t want to force you; it must be a volunteer. I want one of you to step forward.”

Character Agency

Dismissal


Act 11.2b: Late – Forced Selection

Narrative

Player Options


Additional Notes

Lannet’s Role

Frustration Mechanics

Alternate Path (Act 12b)


Impact on Lannet

  • Increase Frustration

    • Lyndi being late or absent.
    • Attempting to talk to Lannet when she’s already frustrated.
  • Decrease Frustration

    • Arriving early and exchanging pleasantries with the other nurses.
    • Standing by Lannet when the director speaks.
  • Increase Respect

    • Every attempt Lyndi makes to step forward, even if she ultimately can’t.

Act 12: Goodbye

Act 12a: Goodbye Lannet

Narrative

This act begins after Act 11.2a, when Lannet volunteers to go to the front. The director asks Lyndi to step outside while he goes over details with Lannet.

Initial Exchange

After waiting, Lannet exits the office.

Subtle Dialog Prompt appears:

Lannet stops, turns back, and glares at her:

“What?”

This begins their final conversation.

Conversation Dynamics

Hallway Mechanics

Threads of Conversation

Each thread represents a progression of related replies.

Threads and Replies

1. Stay for Your Family

2. Nurse and War

3. You Are a Good Nurse

4. We Could Be Friends

5. Something About Her Stuff

6. The Future

7. I Admire You

8. Never Mind

“Who do you think you are? I told you I hate nosy people. I didn’t step forward for sentimentality but because it is my duty as a nurse. I made the decision. Don’t interfere.”

She runs off, visibly upset.

End Conversation Replies

Unlock Criteria (Examples)

Frustration vs Respect Balance


Act 12b: Goodbye, Lyndi

Trigger

Narrative Setup


Conversation (High Respect)

Interruption Path

No Interruption Path


Act 12: Aftermath

Narrative Flow

Once the act ends, the frame shifts upward and fades to black, leading into the epilogue.


Impact on Lannet

Increase Frustration:

  • Selecting replies that raise frustration.
  • Opting for “Never Mind.”
  • Bringing up overly personal topics, such as her belongings.

Decrease Frustration:

  • Choosing replies that ease tension, such as the “Nurse and War” or “We Could Be Friends” threads.
  • Offering apologies or sincere reflections when appropriate.

Increase Respect:

  • Navigating the conversation well and avoiding excessive frustration.
  • Choosing replies that genuinely acknowledge Lannet’s strengths or actions, such as those in the “I Admire You” thread.

Epilogue


Epilogue A: Lannet’s Departure


Epilogue B: Lyndi’s Departure


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October 31, 2025